Detective 2: Thomas Popay
Witness: Luke Swaine
Officer: Sam Valente
Witness: please! Come quick, I’ve found a body by the bridge, I think he fell.
Cut
Detective 2:
you should really stop smoking you know.
Detective 1:
My family thinks so too, Maybe a new year’s resolution?
Officer enters scene
Detective 1:
Morning officer.
Officer:
Sir, the body’s over there in the corner, initial reports are here along with forensics reports,
, this looks like a weird one sir.
Detective 1:
Alright, I’ll take a look.
Cut
Detective 1:
What’s this?
Throws/catch cut
Detective 1:
What’s in there?
Detective 2:
Diamonds.
Detective 1:
Looks like robbery wasn’t the motive.
Cut
Detective 1:
What’s this? Huh, foreign licence.
Cut
Detective 2:
So what was the killer actually after then?
Cut
Detective 1:
I don’t know but I plan to find out, there’s a blood trail over there, looks like something was dripping the victim’s blood.
Cut
Detective 2:
Let’s see where this leads.
Cut
Detective 1:
What’s that? Looks like a briefcase or something.
Cut
Detective 2:
there it is
Cut
Detective 2: So what do you think happened?
Detective 1:
Well…
Narration of flashback begins
Detective 1:
The killer knew the victim would be there, so he waited for him and simply took him by surprise and pushed him off the bridge later throwing the case in the river.
Narration of flashback ends
Detective 2:
that makes sense, but what’s in the case?
Detective1:
Let’s find out.
Cut to opening of case
Detective 2:
Shit.
I think that this script is a good one because it explores the key things we wnat the audience to notice, such as the briefcase, the fact that nothing important was stolen. The script also leaves the audience in suspence for what will happen after the titles have past. I enjoyed filming with this script although some words in the script are missing, but it really doesn't effect the film in any way.
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